When I got a revision request for my third novel that stumped me in some very big ways, I was almost ready to give up. That's when I started making outlines that were too long to fit in a notebook without lots of flipping back and forth. To see them linearly, I taped them to the wall above my couch, where I could see them while I worked. I also started sticking post-its up there, but this was a bad idea because they were an invitation for my cat to climb up there and unstick them. (When I finally moved, there were dozens of post-its behind the couch.)
| Incarnation 1: post-its (Novel 3 plot wall). There are also receipts taped to that wall, where I wrote things down while I was shopping or without my notebook. |
That first plot wall ultimately did not help me. It wasn't until a couple months later, when I had given up on that manuscript, that I had an epiphany that involved cutting the first three chapters...and shortly after everything else. I decided to add in points of view, too, which I could not do without planning.
To rearrange my new scenes and all my new material, I tried using a storyboard.
| Incarnation 2: storyboard (Novel 3 plot wall) |
I eventually gave up on that novel, but it did get me some really nice, encouraging rejections. The storyboard definitely helped me see how my points of view were arranged, and how the plot unfolded between all of them.
When I was working on my fourth novel, revising the ridiculously unorganized and pretty darn bad first draft, I returned to the plot wall. What I learned from my previous plot walls is to plan revisions first. Even still, I did a lot of back tracking as I revised, because sometimes my plan didn't account for things, or I came up with something new to add, or a better way to do something, or encountered a problem I didn't realize was there.
| Incarnation 3: better organization (Novel 4 plot wall) |
This is also when I started printing out my manuscripts.
| Remember me? One revised draft with each chapter printed out and cut up at least three times. |
Finally, finally, I've come up with a better way to do this. (Though not one that kills any fewer trees, I'm sorry to admit.) First I write down all my jumbled notes in a notebook. Pages upon pages of notes for the next draft of my novel. Random ideas. Places where I start with one idea, contradict myself, and go flying off in the opposite direction.
Then I consolidate those notes, discard the ideas that don't work or that I no longer like or that I replaced with something better, and I make my plot wall.
| Incarnation 4: consolidation (Novel 4 plot wall). My wall is also prettier now that I've moved. |
Does anyone else do something like this while writing or revising? If you're a neater person than me (and also friendlier to the poor trees), how do you keep your thoughts organized?
I do something similar. I definitely need the visuals as I write. For my current WIP, I NaNo-ed it, made it a delightful mess, then did a chapter by chapter point-form synopsis which ended up being 32 pages long. I didn't print it out, (I tab back and forth between the manuscript and the outline) but I usually print out drafts because for some odd reason, the words magically change once the story's on actual paper.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, scrivener saved me when it came to outlining! LOVE these pictures and your new wall is very lovely. :)
I love learning about other writers' processes!
ReplyDeleteI steer clear of hard copy outlines mostly because I have a curious four-year-old who's been known to do some paper shuffling. :) I like a color-coded scene outline document that's constantly shifting and growing and changing. I leave it open whenever I'm writing/revising so I can refer back to it whenever I need to.
I do love how your plot wall looks, though... Creativity up on display for all to see!
I love learning about other writers' processes!
ReplyDeleteI steer clear of hard copy outlines mostly because I have a curious four-year-old who's been known to do some paper shuffling. :) I like a color-coded scene outline document that's constantly shifting and growing and changing. I leave it open whenever I'm writing/revising so I can refer back to it whenever I need to.
I do love how your plot wall looks, though... Creativity up on display for all to see!
I pantsed my entire novel, and then decided that for the rewrite, maybe I'd better outline...so now I have a corkboard on the wall by my desk with color-coded index cards stuck to it, so that way I can shuffle things around easily if I need to.
ReplyDeleteI have something amazingly similar on my desktop. I have things organized by scenes that are ready to go, scenes I'm working on, folders for different parts of the story,...I need to take a picture. Visuals are so much better! And then I have a notebook for characters and chapter outlines. And I print out hard copies. And a whole bunch of other stuff that probably only makes sense to me. :)
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